det er meget tydligt at se at Melis

det er meget tydligt at se at Melissa prøver at oplyse om lære os om problemet ghost children, hvilket man tydeligt ser i de første 11 linjer. Hun bruger meget fakta, fx fra ATL (association off teachers and lectures. så det ikke kun hendes mening, men også nogen profeseres mening. Udover fakta kommer hun også med hendes egen mening. det er tydeligt at forstå hun har dårlig samvittighed da hun synes det er rigtig synd at hun brokker sig over skole og ikke gider op når hendes vækkeur ringer, og der så er mange børn i Afrika som så gerne vil afsted, men ikke kan.

Resultater (Engelsk) 1:

it is very tydligt to see that Melissa tries to disclose teach us about the problem ghost children, which is clearly visible in the first 11 lines. She uses very facts, eg from ATL (Association off teachers and lectures. So it's not just her opinion, but also no profeseres sense. Besides the fact she comes also with her own opinion. It is clear to understand her feel guilty when she appears it's a real shame that she was complaining about school and do not bother up when her alarm clock ringing and there so many children in Africa who so wish to leave, but can not.

Resultater (Engelsk) 2:

It is very reasonable to see that Melissa is trying to enlighten us about the problem of ghost children, which is evident in the first 11 lines. She uses a lot of facts, e.g. from ATL (association off teachers and lectures. So not only her opinion, but also the opinion of some professions. Besides the facts, she also comes with her own opinion. It is clear to understand she has a bad conscience as she thinks it is a real pity that she is complaining about school and not bothered when her alarm clock rings, and there are many children in Africa who would like to go but cannot.

Resultater (Engelsk) 3:

It's very clear that Melissa is trying to enlighten us about the problem of ghost children, as you can clearly see in the first eleven lines. She uses a lot of facts, for example from ATL (association off teachers and lectures). So it's not just her opinion, it's also the opinion of some prophets. In addition to the facts, she makes her own point. It's clear she has a guilty conscience because she thinks it's a real shame that she complains about school and doesn't like it when her wake-up bell rings, and then there's a lot of kids in Africa who want to go but can't.